Sorry if this is harsh
The animation isn't bad, however coupled with low recording quality and lack of sound FX, not to mention music, this could have done better. All you need to do is dig up a big load of sounds, and some suitable tunes, add a new layer to the .fla, and start adding it in. Re-recording the voices wouldn't hurt either. Be smart and you can overhaul the whole thing, not to mention your score.